song writing

I started by going onto logic and playing around with some different loops and found one with a rhythm that I liked. I came up with a melody and started by just humming the melody along with this rhythm to come up with how I wanted it to sound. I was struggling to find a melody that fit with the original chords so I changed the chords and changed the chord pattern for the chorus an pre chorus and found a sound that I liked.

i took inspiration from the kooks but strayed of as i went through.

I came up with some basic lyrics that i thought fitted the song well:

Your sea shell neckless brings me to to earth 

I’m a thousands milies and I feel such hurt

I’m skipping far can’t drive by car 

And a thousand miles seems pretty far 

But by 500 I’m half way there 

I’ll walk 1 mill to just to show I care

You watch the cameras like all the time 

And your hair just glistened  its out of line 

You watch the radio you hear old films 

Cos nothing works like it should until 

I find you waiting on the shore 

Of a pebbled beach I thort I checked before

Listen baby and hear my cries

I’m a thousand miles from paridice 

Don’t listen to them and there lies 

I’m the one for you