My feedback was mostly positive, with very little in the “Points for development” section. My biggest places for development were speaking louder during the presentation, using images in my presentation and asking about my plans for collaboration in this project. For the first two, I feel I presented in a way where not just everyone can hear me but everyone understood what I was saying and I feel like if I used images it would have ruined the aesthetic of the powerpoint, however I understand how images could be more useful to get a point across to the audience. When it comes to collaboration, I am not too sure where I was with cast and actors just yet as I haven’t wrote the script yet. However, it is something I am looking into because it will be really helpful for me to get this sort of thing planned out so when it comes to production I don’t get left behind.
The feedback also touched on strength in the presentation and general idea. For example, someone touched on how I was revisiting an old project and I am happy that this went noticed as it shows through my presentation I got through what I wanted to tell the audience. I was also told that the presentation was very detailed, which I was very happy with as I did try to include as much detail as possible without making the presentation too bulky and not very pleasant to look at, so I am glad I struck a balance of both informative and nice design of presentation, as mentioned by Bailey saying “Brilliantly designed presentation”.