After I showcased my advertisement to my peers in my class I have received some information after show casing it to the room here is what they said.
What was good about the presentation?
- Jack: The music was spot on and mildly energetic & happy.
- Liam: The music was high bpm.
What do you think could be improved?
- Jack: Some scenes could’ve been edited better included the keying and resolution of some assets.
- Liam: There could’ve been more shots used and the narration could’ve been more clear. The focus wasn’t on the subject for some of the shots causing blur.
How would you rate the quality of the advert?
- Jack: 7/10
- Liam: 5/10
What was good about the presentation?
- Jack: The music was spot on and mildly energetic & happy.
- Liam: The music was high bpm.
What do you think could be improved?
- Jack: Some scenes could’ve been edited better included the keying and resolution of some assets.
- Liam: There could’ve been more shots used and the narration could’ve been more clear. The focus wasn’t on the subject for some of the shots causing blur.
How would you rate the quality of the advert?
- Jack: 7/10
- Liam: 5/10
Here is the feedback I have received and more will be added as soon as I have finished writing this. My feedback I have gotten shows how people have reacted to my advertisement and see how they reacted to my advertisement.
Bailey- What was good about the presentation?
I really loved how the advert graohics were made really smooth and enjoyable and the camera work was nice and smooth and loved the voiceover on the advert.
What do you think could be improved?
I really liked the advert there is nothing wrong too much with the advert although the music at the start could of lowered slightly though.
How would you rate the quality of the advert?
It was decent and the quality was high in definition
Any other comments?
no
Leon- What was good about the presentation?
It was clear and well presented.
What do you think could be improved?
More transitions and creativity.
How would you rate the quality of the advert?
8/10
Jack (separate from Harley) -What was good about the presentation?
Overall cinematography is good, editing was good.
What do you think could be improved?
The music didn’t fit the product, volume was a bit too loud.
How would you rate the quality of the advert?
8/10
I really enjoyed the feedback I have received from my peers it will help me further in the future also I could use this feedback I got from my peers although some of this feedback I got from my peers may seem useless it could prove to be a turning point in my work so I can get better marks from my tutors.
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