Sound design project 1:
The grade I got was a Distinction for my first sound design project. To maintain this for the next project is to add more detail. For the context element I could expand upon on how a they use Foley in a variety of ways and what roles come with Foley in all media. For the research element I could go in depth on how they use to make Foley and to further enhance on what equipment they use to enhance the sounds. For the practical side of the project I could use a wide range of sounds and balance the sounds to make it feel more synchronised instead of using the same sound. For the evaluation part of the project I could add more details to the last paragraph and explain why it would be important to do things differently and why it would be better.