Rough Draft Movie Script

Main character is Rebecca narrating about her imaginary life.

Instantly cuts to her room where Rebecca is going on her laptop or computer with a dull expression.

After that we see her at school walking to go to her history lesson. The camera will shift over to people giving her distasteful look and whispering comments about her but she brushes it off for she has gotten used to being the main target for bullying.

We then cut to Rebecca’s history classroom where her history teacher Mr Hamilton is talking to the class.

Mr Hamilton talking

Welcome back my fellow students. So today I am going to test what you have learned from your previously lesson with me on Abraham Lincoln.

Mr. Hamilton see’s Rebecca resting her head

Mr. Hamilton talking

How about Rebecca can you tell me what year was Abraham Lincoln Born on.

Rebecca talking

I don’t know

Mr. Hamilton talking

Exactly you don’t know because you don’t even listen to what I am explaining to you.

Charlotte can you tell Rebecca over here what year was Abraham Lincoln born on.

Charlotte talking

1809

Mr. Hamilton

thank you as always with your excelent answer.

Charlotte

Your welcome.

Especially with Emo girl over here acting like she’s all depressed.

Mr. Hamilton

Charlotte come on now you tend to ruin in it for yourself when you get to excited.

We instantly cut to Rebeca’s history lesson nearly getting finished.

Mr. Edward talking

Well thank ‘s for your hard work and dedication hope you have a great break to relax your mind. Rebecca your are staying with me.

We cut to Mr. Hamilton talking but Charlotte is mostly silent.

Charlotte leaves Mr. Hamilton’s room and goes to her other lesson. She encounters a helpful member of staff who she met previously that she doesn’t really talk to but offers to help her if she isn’t feeling alright called Mr. Long.

Mr. Long talking

Hello Rebecca how is your day.

Rebecca talking

It’s good

Mr. Long

Oh I am happy to hear it. You know if you ever feel upset please let me know

Rebecca talking

Al right

Mr.Long

Okay goodbye.

We cut to Rebecca’s house.

Rebecca is back from school.

Her brother Johnathan is part of a band and has a cocky personality.

Johnathan makes fun of Rebecca but she ignores him.

Rebecca tries to talk to her mum and dad but there really busy.

We cut to Rebecca going to sleep to put her mind at ease but whilst she is sleeping she has a dream of Mr Hamilton. charlotte and the rest of the other students teasing her.

Dream sequence of Mr Hamilton, Charlotte and her bullies teasing her in his classroom.

Cut to the next day

In Mr. Hamilton’s class Charlotte a paper ball at Rebecca. Mr Hamilton send’s Charlotte out of the class.

We then cut to Rebeca on her break time. She is sitting on a table and pulls out a knife.

I have thought about shooting this scene in the Lister Building Cafeteria.

Flashback

It turns out that Rebeca snuck a knife in her tech classroom at break time to commit suicide.

Present time

But all of a sudden

Mr. Long touches Rebeca in her shoulder with Rebeca smiling for the first time in a while and the movie end’s. The ending is meant to show us the audience that there is always someone there to talk to for help.