My name is Luke Ayres and I am currently studying on the Level 3 Extended Music Performance and Production course at Bradford college. This project is to write a 1,500 word essay, which is referenced properly. In order for this project to be a success, I must meticulously research and gather intel about every aspect of the topic I am writing about. I will then type up a formal but interesting essay about my chosen topic. The first step, is to narrow down which option I would like to write my essay on. From then on, I can get working. I am excited to work on this project and believe I can attain a good grade.
One of the things I would like to work on is my context. During this project, it is important to link all of my ideas and research back to house music, and the industry itself. I have to start asking questions like, is this relevant? By doing this I can take out irrelevant sentences and ideas to leave me with a polished piece of work.
The next thing I would like to work on is my research. I believe research is more important in this project than it ever has been. My essay needs to be filled with quality information, that is both relevant but interesting. If I can do this correctly, I believe I can obtain a great grade.
Lastly, i just need to slow my work down. I need to take better care when doing my writing to make sure it is the best piece of work i can produce. I need to get in the habit of checking my work to make sure that everything is in the right place. I need to structure my paragraphs better to make for easier reading of my work.
These are three things I would like to work on during this project. If I can do all of this then I believe I can attain a great grade.