top girl evaluation

I really had so much fun during the making of this short film although I wish I had more time to make the story longer and better structured but I am still happy with the finish. I had the idea of this short film from this other show called top boy and I made my own story. Most of the scenes I found hard was at home because sometimes I couldn’t get the perfect angle because I was on my own, but one scene I did at home and I think was kind of dangerous and silly but fun to do was taping my Samsung phone in the ceiling and record my self and having different angle shots in my opinion is more interesting as it has more movement to the slow scenes of the story and will catch the audiences attention. The rest of the recordings was done in college and with the help of my friend maya. As a whole I used the same camera and tripod. Feedback I got from teachers and my classmates were really good and the story was easy to understand and follow. They also really liked the intro and the fact that i put the past and then present for the audience to understand. Another thing I also added was in every new character I stopped few seconds to introduce them. The characters was me and maya