After showcasing my idea for my FMP last Friday I have achieved some feedback which I will be going over and talking about.
Amar’s feedback
What was good?
- Very well put together+ well structured
- Great break downs
- Research breakdown is well done
- Very extensive
Any improvements?
- Mood board to give an idea of what the documentary will look like.
Now the feedback I have gotten from Amar shows me some key insights that I did not know about when I was showcasing last Friday and I want to look into to .
Great break downs- what I think he means by this is hat everything was cramped together but it was able to be done and presented.
Very extensive- It was very large as I have lots of research on my topic