Peer Feedback:
Some feedback said I had good ideas, nice problem solving and all my points are precise and clear. However, they mentioned how I didn’t reference properly, which is probably because I didn’t use Harvard referencing. To work on these improvements, I’m going to go back and Harvard reference.
Some said I made some good points whilst presenting and I have good confidence when I was presenting to the class, they also mentioned that I have some strong ideas which can aim for good work. However, they did mention that I should try and add more aims and objectives to give more description on certain points and ideas.
Tutor Feedback:
Lewis mentioned that I needed to reference properly because I didn’t use Harvard referencing so I do need to go back and edit those slides and reference properly. He also asked a question about if I was collaborating with people for the photos etc so I think I may need to word that a little bet because that seemed to be a little unclear.
Ben suggested I use college resources, if we’re aloud back in college, which I think is a really good idea because they have proper equipment and it’s a lot quieter so my recording will have a lot better sound quality if I can into college to record.
Nic complimented my idea and said I justified it really well, as well as having a well thought through plan for my resources. However, he felt like it was more of an idea as it was quite underdeveloped as I need to work out more of the specifics. He also suggested, I do a lot of research into how well I could do a piano/guitar duo because they can clash a lot due to the fact that they cover the same sonic range. He also mentioned how such a complex issue, of the piano and guitar clashing, can be hard to fix with a limited guitarist because he’s not very experienced. However, I feel like guitar chords and piano melodies would still work so I don’t see it being too much of an issue and I can ask for help or research if needed. Lastly, he suggested doing a story board for my edit to follow and then getting feedback on a draft. I think that’s a really good idea because the story board will help me compile the edit but also give me a frame work to base my basic melody on. Then, the feedback can help me see where certain bits need to be emphasised etc, like if they’re not getting the emotion I want them to, how do I change it?