Initial String Ideas

Take 1

Cello starts before the piano and it just comes in too early. The pattern it’s playing is very nice but it’s need to build in better. The cello does take the piece into a very different direction, it makes it sound a lot lighter. 30 seconds in sounds like it clashes with the piano. 50 seconds in is out of time and it just doesn’t really work well with the piano at all.

Take 2

Cello starts too early again, it starts right away. However, the cello gives a different feel to the piece again, it makes the emotions feel much lighter. 20 seconds in sounds like it clashes a little.

Take 3

Cello is very out of time throughout.