FMP 2023 pitch feedback
Overall my pitch was a resounding success, due to the feedback that I received being mainly positive as can be seen below from some peer feedback that I received.
Overall the main strengths that i found out included the idea that i had to take forward was a very strong concept that i could develop into a finished documentary. The peer feedback was very similar to the feedback that I received from my tutor as they also agreed that the concept that I had come up with for my final project was very strong and there was huge potential for my project going forward. Other strengths that were mentioned was that my target audience was very clear as well as my knowledge on the software that i will want to use and the backup software that i have chosen for my project. This is a very positive thing as my audience for my pitch were also members of my target audience so if the audience for my pitch believed that the concept for my idea is suitable for them. My tutor also believed that I had chosen the ideal target audience for my documentary for it to be the most successful. Finally the research that I had conducted for my pitch was picked up on from peers and my tutor. In my pitch i had written about what areas of Bradford i was going to showcase throughout my documentary, i spoke about why i had chosen these areas and the main reason was due to the research i conducted and living in Bradford my whole life i had vast knowledge of which areas were better than others, i used this knowledge as well as research to decide where i am going to showcase. If i was to do this pitch again i would not change a lot of things about it however i may add more images to make my presentation more interactive and do my best to keep audience retention as certain slides could have been more interactive for the audience. However overall my pitch was a great success with my peer and tutor feedback also believed that my whole presentation was very clear and i delivered my concept with professionalism and confidence.
Bellow is my proposal