To improve our song I need to think about a second verse to make the song more interesting and less repeating. I also need to work on my improvisation in the last chorus and how I should end the song. I also need to learn when I need to sing because I sometimes forget when to start singing or I sing when I’m not supposed to.
Mock Performance
LYRICS
2x:
I don’t know what went wrong but we are here
you said that you would be right here with me
1x:
This is the end your lies are just pretended
we are over now I don’t want to see you
I don’t know what went wrong your still not here
1x:
I don’t know what went wrong but we are here
you said that you would be right here with me
2x:
This is the end your lies are just pretended
we are over now I don’t want to see you you have disappeared
Structure:
intro = guitar, and vocals
verse=everyone
pre chorus= everyone apart (no vocals)
chorus= everyone
after chorus= everyone (no vocals )
verse= everyone
chorus=everyone
bridge= no vocals
verse= guitar and vocals
double chorus= everyone
For this performance, I think that we could do much better because I forgot when I should start singing and I almost sang the wrong verse I think that this performance wasn’t our best and that our practice ones were much better to improve this we need to practice more as a group and learn our parts. Another improvement we could make is our stage presence and also me talking to the crowd. As a singer, I need to be able to learn how to communicate with the crowd to make it more exciting but also to let them know what we are doing or maybe talk about the song and how we created it or what are the lyrics about. Another improvement we should make is to work at the end of the song because, in my opinion, we could do it much better. I was confused and I didn’t know when I should stop singing. Although we made many mistakes I think that we still performed decently because we had 2 weeks to learn this song so I think that if we had more time or maybe practiced more we would make our song more successful.