Today I’m going to be talking about my first song I ever performed in England. I sang this song for a Christmas Showcase in my high school. This was one of the first songs I performed on my own in England. I was really scared to perform but I had my family that was supporting me through the whole performance . I also had my friends with me and they helped me to get over my stage fright.
This was our first time trying to make a radio show. Each one of us had to pick a song and talk about it. I think that we all did a good job about talking about the songs but there was lack of dialogue which is very needed in radio shows to make them interesting so listeners will enjoy it. Overall, I think that it needs ore planning and to add more dialogue and make it more interesting so others can enjoy our show and that it lasts long.
Feedback:

I think that for our first take we got a pretty positive feedback. As a group we need to improve by planing everything out and deciding what will we talk about who will introduce us the order we will talk in and focus more on the dialogue. This is the most important thing for us because we need to make it more interesting . Another thing is timing we need to have it long enough we need to find a topic to talk about something interesting that others can enjoy it too.
For my individual target is to try and talk more ask questions communicate with others and make the show interesting. Also ask more questions and have a normal genuine conversation.
TAKE 2
This has been one of the longest takes we ever did and I think we did a pretty good job. We talked more and engaged into each others songs. There are still improvements to be made we need to find a strong topic to talk about and make it interesting also we need to make sure we are not facing any technical difficulties. However, this was our longest take and I think it turned out pretty good. We all sounded much more confident and we knew what we doing. We had a clear plan of what we will be talking about and what songs we will be talking about. We created a set list and decided in what order we will talk about.
Final Performance-
https://drive.google.com/file/d/11vNgr9bkzuiABBHLSWYYd5AtdYAzGWvA/vie
In our final performance we changed it up I introduced the show and what we will be talking about. We were all much more confident we laughed and enjoyed recording this show. for the performance we didn’t have much time to practise but I think that it turned out pretty well. the feedback from David was that the recording of the songs wasn’t loud enough which I agree with and therefore the audience had problem listening to the songs. overall I think though that for our first show it turned out pretty good and I think others enjoyed it