Group ensemble composition (EXAMPLE)

This  was our first composition that we did as a whole class.  However after this composition I  went to Slovakia because personal reasons so I missed 2 weeks of college. On this experiment we had less than 45 minutes to make a song we decided on the elements  of music and how we want them to be played. After that we all learned our parents and created a melody for our song then we didn’t write up any lyrics so we just read out sentences from a sheet that we got earlier on the lesson. T o improve this song we need to think about the lyrics but also improve on the strict of the song maybe also add a bridge to the song and also focus on our intro and outdo of the song.