I think I spoke a lot louder during this presentation than I di with my initial idea.
One thing that went well is that I explained most of my ideas in a good amount of detail and also quite confidently. I covered most topics I needed to include within the proposal, and put together a small plan of what I wanted to be doing each week. Instead of just saying what research etc. I wanted to do, I gave reasons why it was important and how it fit into my project, and I believe this was one of the strongest points within the presentation.
One thing I do need to work on is my actual presentation and body language. I rarely (if at all) spoke directly to my classmates and John, and spent most of my time when presenting looking at my slides or reading off of my phone. In any future presentations, I could work on delivering them in more of a professional way, and engaging with my classmates and tutors more often throughout the presentation.
I will take all feedback from my peers and tutors on board for my final project.