I believe that I articulated my ideas relatively well to the class because afterwards, I only had one question from another student which means I expressed my ideas clearly and in a way that was clearly understood. For this same reason I believe that my powerpoint was also effective.<\/p>\n
One area of my proposal that I could improve on is explaining my ways to document evidence. I very briefly explained how I would document what I will be doing in my project but I could have gone in to more detail by giving an example of a schedule I would use. Another aspect was the layout of the presentation. I had a lot of writing on all the slides but didn’t actually use the writing on the slides to deliver my presentation. I\u00a0could’ve\u00a0benefited from having a script that i would speak from and having a less complex slideshow with more pictures and less\u00a0information.<\/p>\n
Some feedback I got from my tutor was to look at different bands to what I had already listed. This is because the bands that I had listed all fall under the genre of rock\/metal. One of the bands that was suggested to me was a band called ‘The Meters’ this will help me develop our style our style because they are a band that influenced ‘the red hot chili peppers’ and use a lot of complex and funky rhythms in their music. Another piece of feedback I got was to look at other producers who produced those bands’ songs to take inspiration from their recording\u00a0techniques\u00a0and drum sounds.<\/p>\n